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Cheater(cheater's point of view)

Look baby, sure what I did was wrong
But I've been with you for so long
I use to be a mack not trying to bullshit
Just needed to see if I still got it

But you must see
That I can't help it, if these women love me
So don't leave me
Because I'm a P.I.M.P

Being faithful, I tried
But I never lied
I just tell half truths
Wanting to have fun, while I still have my youth

And yeah I know that you've cared for me
Since I don't have a job you see
I'll look after the Super Bowl
But baby my team is on a roll

And yeah I'm staying in your house
Tearing it apart like a mouse
Yet the fact is and always will be
That you need me

And no it's not true
I'm not tried of you
I know about the mix signs I send
Just needed to explore my options

Yet you need to understand
That I'm only human
You know I never meant to hurt you
However, a man's got to do, what a man's got to do

Author notes

That is what I have to hear everytime a boyfriend of mine screws up. I'm fed up...so I decided to put it on paper!
Written December 24th, 2005

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  • DarkChildsKiss silver member
    May 20, 2006
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    That's so true. I can't stand to be lied to. It makes me soooo mad. Especially when I have given my all and all only to found that you are full of bs you know.
    Thank you for leaving a comment!

  • ReptileStarseed
    May 20, 2006
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    Wow, men are just so concieted sometimes!!! do they actually think we believe that crap? That's really sad that this type of thing happens when it really shouldn't. I tend to look down on dishonesty, but unfortunatly there are decietful people everywhere. I think that if you're going to be with someone, be with them, but if you want to see another, why not break up? Sure it will be hard to do now, but it's easier in the long run for everyone.


  • that kesha kid
    April 20, 2006
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    i was just kind of surfing through the site and i came across this

    this has got to be the most funniest thing if ever read!!!!
    and the sad thing is that its all true!!!
    but still this is halarious ( i dont know if i spelled that right)


  • GorgeouslyBroken
    December 27, 2005
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    this makes me laugh! I like the end! but guys are retarded! lol! well written! Loves~ Jamie


  • TheThinker
    December 26, 2005
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    Well written

    ummmm almost could see that as a rap?
    But what do I know..
    Well written again!


  • DarkChildsKiss silver member
    December 26, 2005
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    Thank you. And those words were more than enough for me.
    ~Jerri~


  • Faded Existence
    December 26, 2005
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    Oh i loved it... it was really good I can't really fine any other words to say about it. great write!
    ~Amber~

  • DarkChildsKiss silver member
    December 24, 2005
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    Thanks for your comment. Some guys are so full of themselves. So they use women prove a point. SAD! But thanks for reading!


  • Iohagh
    December 24, 2005
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    This type write I have written too and it was fantasy for me but men, especially older men took it as an invitation to attack me so I got rid of it. Do what you like but know it is hard to get and keep a guy with stuff like this on your page because for some reason guys think their woman is different and that is a head game too. Pimps always tried to get orphanage girls because many of us were raped by someone and they could play it. I think the spirit of Yolanda just kept me walking onwards. If you need some of Yolanda's spirit. I give it to you now. Yo Yo Yo. Go Girl. Ciao now.

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