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SweetSilverNinja

Woooo-Boom!!

Is The sound that  is heard as one breaks into our realm, our dimension.
She's in a crouching position with the blaring sun at her back.
Only the silhouette of her physique to give a small discription.
As the sun rose higher her silhouette fades, and image brightens.
She stands to her feet with a shape that is so profound.

She a feline, a Lioness with that of the anatony of a gorgeous woman.
Her beauty is unsurpassed, as is fury.  Her eyes soft enough to melt
the hardest heart, but  can pierce through your very soul to find the
truth. She's a warrior queen dressed for battle.

Her armour is made from pure silver. Forged in the hottest caverns
on her world.  It's sleek, sensuous, and when struck,becomes hard as
steel. Though it moves, and breathes like Egyption Silk. Her
sword forged from pure silveras well, but with diamond tipped
and edge.

She is a lioness, a ninja arrayed in silver. To her enemies she's an
uncanny warrior of truth with almost unmatched skills.
Lightening reflexes, and a beyond perfect hunting abilities.
They  cower in her presence, and shake at the sound of
her name SilverNinja.

To those who know her intimately.  She's a queen of the pride.
A mother, a sister, a friend, and some one who has felt
her nurturing touch. They  have heard the sweet honey like
words of her mouth. They have known the harmonious
laughter of her humor. Even though she is a mature queen,
apart of The Cat People. She also a kitten, their kitten,Their
SweetSilverNinja.

                      In this world which would    
                       she be to you?

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Written December 24th, 2005

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  • Violet Moodswing Greeters member
    March 22, 2006
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    What a wonderful tribute for someone so special to our group. Thanks so much for enterring it and reminding us of one of the big reasons we joined the Sisterhood of the Cats initially.

    For those of you who don't know, SweetSilverNinja was our --head cat-- before she took an AP break. We miss her immensely and hope she returns soon.

    Thanks so much for enterring this piece and good luck in the contest.

  • Poetic Steel
    December 26, 2005
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    Thank you alot! She's is worth every word, and some I think any way. LOL! Your comment really floods my heart to read. I'm truly honoured! Thank you!!!!


  • Airborne Ed silver member
    December 25, 2005
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    Your poem is beautiful and honours our sweet silver ninja. Her heart reaches out to embrace everyone, with a tenderness few can discribe. Your poem is very touching and tells everyone just how special our queen really is. Thank you for writting this very beautiful poem in her honour. Merry Christmas..

  • Poetic Steel
    December 25, 2005
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    Thank you rabid! You know I'm really glad ya like it. More than that I'm glad your back. Thanks doll!!

  • rabidgnomes
    December 24, 2005
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    WOOOOOOOOOOOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! this was so good and it describes gemmie so well! prrrrrrfect! great work!!! I love the touch about when you strike her liquidish armor it turns hard as steel... the imagery there was amazing.

    ~Cara~


  • tarr
    December 24, 2005
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    well! This is so sweet! Great poem! ta!
    A.

  • Poetic Steel
    December 24, 2005
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    No thank you! For taking time to read it and leave such a beautiful comment. I can't tell you how my heart is warmed by it. Thank you again

  • Poetic Steel
    December 24, 2005
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    She a Lioness! LOL! A warrior queen!


  • wbiro gold member
    December 24, 2005
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    which is she? I would have to say a lion tamer! lol Nice tribute, brother tom...


  • December 24, 2005
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    Fantastic! Thank you!

    Wwwwwwwwwwwwwwooooooooooowwwwwwwwwwwwwwww ! woooooooooooohooooooooooooo! I can meooooooowwwwww on this! Or even howl! awwwwwwwwwwooooooooohhhhhhh!
    You just extremely blown up my head in so much ego with this write my dearest brother nova! Meoooooooowwwwwww! My heart has expanded into an enormous size that it fill up my whole breast! hahahahaha.. oh.. what am I thinking? lol.. What I mean is my heart always double the size right now.. and of course don't forget the pancreas! It has expanded as well! lol.. I love it so much my brother, and I am going to print this up! You have those words that really want me to dance to the music of " Messy Elliott" the tunes of Lost Control! Wow!

    You are really a talented poet, my dear Superman, super hero, super writer and a super brother! Can you read my mind? Do you know what it is all about? Wondering who you are? Just a friend from another star?
    lol
    Ok, I stop now, Merry Christmas my brother Nova, thank you very very much from the bottom of my heart!

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