Lost in space
There is no trace
To where I May be found
There is no end to my misery
The pain that you have caused for me
The feelings that shut me down
There is no way
For me to say
How I really feel
For I loved you
And it is true
That you will never feel the same
I hope one day
You will realize
How I saw you in my eyes
But until then
My long lost friend
I guess I'll say goodbye
Author notes
this is a little different than what I usually write... normally I would have a song, but oh well!! you got this 
ok I guess I want a brother because I don't have one on here yet! I have a VERY large family and besides a son, that is the only thing I don't have
Written December 24th, 2005
A contest entry
- Family peeps....i want more. by Mike Driscoll jnr.
700 points, ended December 26, 2005, 4 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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wow....a songwriter as well....im impressed by the poem and that i have found a songwriter....you can be my brother even if you don't win...thats up to you. Im mightily impressed by the emotions displayed by you in this poem so i guess this deserves an applause.
michael -
omg i love this poem it is really good you are ag reat writer and i can totaly realte to this keep it up!!!!!!!!! thanx for sharing this with all of us here at allpoetry really enjoyed the read
love ya
~*becca*~
you are a great writer
keep up the great and awesumly awesum work!!! -
I swear u rock, but with every poem u just get better and better! u rock doll,
chow
mom. -
Good work.
AWW! that is a really sweet poem .
I really really liked it.
Very simple yet very strong...
Love the message
My favorite lines are:
For I loved you
And it is true
That you will never feel the same
I hope one day
You will realize
How I saw you in my eyes"
Good work, good luck finding an AP new member.
Edited on Dec 24, 9:51 because 'corrections'.
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