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Passioned Silence

Stuck in the corners of those lucid
dreams, momentarily iridescence quake
in mutual longing...

Here we lie in suspended relaxation--
awaiting for that lonely glide of
entwinment to happen again

Exquisite bodies(as such) and
everything surrounding making noise
goes to deaf ears

Author notes

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Picture: Geisha Solitude
provided from Nancy H. Cole
Written December 24th, 2005

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