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Haiku: Revelation


Book of Life aflamed
phoenixed the Prophet; ashes;
Glorious Go(l)d ... Joy!

myra

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Written February 14th, 2002

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  • SilverQ
    October 30, 2008

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    Why can I only give 3 applause?

    AMAZING. Multitudes of meaning, Deeper than any poem I have EVER read. Its...Its...Its...words fail me. Your poetry is so....TRUE and POETIC. Ten trillion thumbs up.


  • CookieZeal Greeters member
    December 1, 2006

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    I just HAD to see the first piece you posted!

    You are an original. And your joy was always launched from the Lord's passion.
    Let me give you a prophetic review.

    "Book of Life..............Your following 1100 or more
    are graduates of of this prophecy.!!!!!!!! Isn't that something?


    • myrataal silver member
      December 1, 2006
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      Was this the first piece? Is it not Words Written in Water? LOL I cannot remember -- it is so many poems ago ...


  • Foretold-Events
    February 14, 2002
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    Very good. Thanks for your contribution. : ) I will let you know when the challenge is on is final outcome. : )