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The Mask of Woman



Womankind's many changing masks,
can't always be seen in a looking glass.
It doesn't always so easily show,
it's hidden in layers deep,and not always shown.

She's learned in time to keep thoughts well hidden,
not exposing all feelings of which she is smitten.
To show an affection to many in life,
will bring her heartache and cause too much strife.

She can change her mind,as fast as her looks.
And mean every word regardless of how it's took.
It's not insincerity, oh no on the contrary,
she's simply changed her views,opinions varied.

Woman is without a doubt sheer poetry,
full realm of emotions expressed so freely.


              ~~~Suseann~~~














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Benfield's "Golden Mask"/this won a gold in Ayizan's contest.
Written December 23rd, 2005

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  • Night Hope gold member
    December 28, 2005
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    Congratulations on winning the gold, suse!!! I'se so proud of ya, my Friend...Great job, Lady... Wander


  • Amunet Wolfbane Moderators member
    December 28, 2005
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    Beautiuflly done and full of the insight into a woman This definiately deserved the Gold. Awesome job on this, it is truly a pleasure to read. Seeps into the soul. Congrats on your win! Peace and Blessings, Gypsy


  • Night Hope gold member
    December 24, 2005
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    '...She can change her mind,as fast as her looks. And mean every word regardless of how it's took. It's not insincerity, oh no on the contrary, she's simply changed her views, opinions varied. Woman is without a doubt sheer poetry, full realm of emotions expressed so freely.' Very good observations on the anything~but~weaker sex, suse...Vividly described & revealed, my Friend...Good luck in the contest... Wander


  • suseann
    December 24, 2005
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    I'm sorry for the spelling mistake,it's been revised.Thanks!


  • CarolDesjarlais silver member
    December 24, 2005
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    Oh, that is the beauty of woman...she is open and allows for those changes...Mother Earth trained us well in being open for wind, fire, earth, and water thoughts....


  • B Chandler
    December 23, 2005
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    lol its Benfield lol

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