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I Saw Santa Cruising the Caribbean

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by ~Gregg Rowe~

(sing to the tune of I Saw Mommy Kissin' Santa Claus)

I saw Santa cruisin’ the Caribbean
In his red and white suit so bright
He didn’t see me peep
As he rowed on down the creek
Swaying amongst children’s presents knee-deep

With the unmistakable beard that's white
Underneath the moonlight so bright
Is when I had my laugh
What a sight it would have been
To see eight reindeer helping Santa last night!



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Written December 23rd, 2005

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  • Elvenfairy
    December 8, 2006

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    lol this certainly made me smile as I thought of it. I wonder what Santa does in hot places like the tropics, shurly a thick fur coat would be far too hot for a place like that even at night? lol, I liked this very much. It made me think of Santa riding a wave with his sack of toys behind him on the surf board. Very fun. Thanks for entering my conetst. Merry Christmas and good luck!


  • April Renee
    January 24, 2006
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    simple but sweet. nicely done. nice to read something different. enjoyed.

    blu


  • jenelda silver member
    December 26, 2005
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    Hi gregg, hey, this is great my friend, I really like the way you have written it to the tune of Mommy kissing santa claus. I hope you had a great Christmas and that you celebrate New Years Eve. Have a real cool time and see you when you get back. Good to see you writing again Gregg, take care.
    Jennifer.


  • leo2
    December 25, 2005
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    I wondered where the heck he had gone..lol. Delighfully lighthearted and truly in the spirit of the season. Thanks for the smiles.

    Sincerely,
    Leo Long
    ps. Thanks, too, for stopping by my home page. Many blessings for you and yours.


  • Edna Sweetlove
    December 25, 2005
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    I have serious doubts about Santa and the reindeer as you will tell by going to www.allpoetry.com/poem/1690722 .
    Edited on Dec 25, 7:54 because ''.

  • pozo
    December 25, 2005
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    Great humourous piece Keep writing, this was a really good parody Great use of alliteration
    Happy Christmas and thanks for your poem
    All the best
    Pozo


  • Empathy-eyes
    December 24, 2005
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    Haha Lovely festive cheer piece, I like it Have a fab Xmas and all that jazz.


  • Sarah957
    December 24, 2005
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    What versitle reindeer Santa has! I need to get me some of those. I'll make it my Christmas wish. I'm squeezing my eyes shut real tight. Do you see them , do you?
    Sarah


  • CarolDesjarlais silver member
    December 24, 2005
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    reindeer doing the backstroke......I wonder how well they can dog-paddle? Oh, what an image.


  • TheThinker
    December 24, 2005
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    well written

    lol... nice light hearted poem. you have such a range..
    Check out my poem Santa quits.. you will see why I thought this highly amusing.
    Happy Xmas

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