What is left in this lie I live?
So many things are changing,
Things I can't control.
I want to hold on to you
And to everything that I had.
I'm scared to let go
And to make new friends
Because I don't want to love them
And then get ripped away from them too.
I'm trying to hold on;
Please don't give up on me.
I'm trying to hold on;
Please don't let me go.
I feel like I'm doing something wrong
If ever I befriend another person
Because I don't want you to feel
Like I am giving up on our friendship.
I can't move on, and I won't move on
Because in my heart I want to go back,
Back to eighth grade sitting together in LAL,
Back to always being together,
Back to laughing and having fun.
But I can't go back,
So I guess I'll have to hang on
And try
To hold on.
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Written December 23rd, 2005
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Very strong!
This is real good, I can feel the sadness and the pain and uncertainty.
Your people won't give up on you, and don't you give up on them, they need you; and most importantly: Don't ever give up on yourself. 
Please keep writing and always go back to it, you'll just get better and better!
Your piece reminded me of a cool song:
KEANE's "Everybody's Changing"
"...You're aching, you're breaking
And I can see the pain in your eyes
Says everybody's changing
And I don't know why..."
www.azlyrics.com/lyrics/keane/everybodyschanging.html
Listen to it, it will make you feel better.
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im not giving up on u.
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"I'm trying to hold on;
Please don't give up on me.
I'm trying to hold on;
Please don't let me go." I LOVED that! lol ... it's something that everybody can relate to and it was wonderfully written good job
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