No one is around me
I have lost all feeling
No one cares about me
I feel so alone
Nobody's here to comfort me
Throughout all of my tears
I feel like I want to die
And stop my cries
My feelings don't matter to anyone
Not even me!
I am lost in my thoughts
With no one to talk to
I am lost
And never to be found
I am bound to live my life alone
With nobody around me
Or even close
Everything seems so unreal to me
Life, itself, is lost to me
But why do i feel this way
WHY!!!
lost in my misery
lostin my insanity
I am lost
And never to be found
Author notes
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Written December 23rd, 2005
A contest entry
- The Choice is Yours by Samplette.
300 points, ended December 24, 2005, 3 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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I think this is something many can relate to, the feeling of being lost. You did a very nice job with this, and I thank you for entering and following the rules.
Sam
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Very touching piece, but you found all of us at AP so you will never be alone. Great write, and a sad read. Good luck in the contest Brenda
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Very good!!! You took an ordinary word and made a strong, yet sad piece of poetry. Very impressive! Best wishes in the contest!~ vickie j
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