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Iohagh

I have known her
Only but a few days, and
Her cheerfulness struck me first,
And then a beautiful soul, and a
Gloriously talented poet previously
Hidden among the Internet's many pages.

   Now joyously I
  sit and wait sO
  for a poem ricH
in spirit and aurA
   of her penninG
to my heart reacH.

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Happy birthday, Cousin!
Written December 23rd, 2005

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  • StoneLion
    December 25, 2005
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    I'm just glad I knew about your birthday in time to write a gift. Be happy and know that you have a lot of people on AP that care for and love you.


  • Iohagh
    December 25, 2005
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    Lets say the time
    is multiplied by rhyme
    for life is unkind
    drink immediacy as wine.

    I could know you
    in years or few
    link my friend who
    whose death who knew.

    Oh sister cousin friend
    let us constantly begin
    when meeting say when
    its like new again.

    Merry Xmas and thanks for the birthday gift.


  • StoneLion
    December 23, 2005
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    Thank you! Have a great day, Roseleaf!


  • StoneLion
    December 23, 2005
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    Hi, Uncle! I'm glad you like it and stopped by to say hi!


  • StoneLion
    December 23, 2005
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    Thanks, Leo. I comment on your work because I enjoy it.


  • StoneLion
    December 23, 2005
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    THank you, sj!


  • StoneLion
    December 23, 2005
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    Thank you!


  • Roseleaf
    December 23, 2005
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    beautiful to the birthday girl and goood luck in the contest and happy times for your birthday


  • Abdul T Alishtari
    December 23, 2005
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    StoneLion My niece sent me this IM "I love everyone. I love you all. Boy I'm acting silly. Later on I'll be embarassed. Screw it that is then and this is now. I love you guys. Ciao now."

    God bless you guys.

  • Abdul T Alishtari
    December 23, 2005
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    Your my niece through Mistic Moonlite and Lovincharmer. They are great people and sister and brother to me. If they love you and Iohagh too then you must be all that and a bag of chips. Nice write. I see my niece likes it. And now red red rose your sis is my niece too. Oh boy, oh my, oh gee. LOL. Ciao for now.


  • leo2
    December 23, 2005
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    I thought the ending acrostic was quite clever and the poem a sincere tribute to a fellow poet. Good luck in the contest.

    Sincerely,
    Leo Long
    ps. Thanks for reading and commenting on my work. I do appreciate it very much.


  • sjgaither
    December 23, 2005
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    Very interesting poem. Very unique style of format used! A really good poem, in my humble opinion!!!!! Much luck in the contest!!!!!!!!!


  • -Tesoro-
    December 23, 2005
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    i like this alot she is a great writer


    ~Turtle~

  • StoneLion
    December 23, 2005
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    Yup, you're officially my sis! I'll make a change on author page when I get home from work announcing it. But I now I gotta go! See you later, Sis!

  • StoneLion
    December 23, 2005
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    Thank you, Linda. Do you want to be my AP sister? Then you'll be a cousin too...I think...I'm little muddy on all the relations, but the more in the family the merrier.


  • StoneLion
    December 23, 2005
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    I'm glad you like it.


  • Iohagh
    December 23, 2005
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    XOXOXOXOXOXO Cousin power yo yo yo Ciao now.

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