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Happy Birthday Iohagh

One year old, one year wise
Ages 1-10, you found magic in the world.
During your teens, you found that boys didn’t have cooties
As so as you hit 20, the real world began.
The real magic has shown you sights.
The sun never seemed so bright.
Your free and still learning.
Growing as human’s do.
Nearly an end to a decade,
Who knows what this world will show you.
The wonders growing and waiting for your smile.
Keep it showing, and keep growing.

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i wrote this right after i saw the invite to be in this contest, it is the words spoken to me, i thought i would share and add to them. you should do the same, here's hoping like me you will get use out of it.
Written December 23rd, 2005

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  • Disturbed Prodigy
    January 3, 2006
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    i just met her, i don't really know her to well but tell me when your b-day is and i'll see what i can do.


  • Cheeky paper
    January 3, 2006
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    It's really nice piece! Very well done!

    ** wish i could have one write me a birthday poem , just like you written this to your friend! **

  • Brokenpen
    January 2, 2006
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    another awesome write

    this was a wonderful poem and written for a friend .. truly well done and thoughtful. thank you for shaeing your words with me. keep on writting.


  • Meribellez
    December 30, 2005
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    wow, this is absolutly fabulous. it is such wisdomous advice, and so so true.
    I cracked up at the boys dont have cooties part.
    happy birthday lohagh!


  • Iohagh
    December 25, 2005
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    You are so intellectual
    and thus so effectual
    my age is technical
    and rage is irrational.

    I balance my nature
    and sought a cure
    finding none for sure
    for my feminine allure.

    What about my mind
    are men all blind
    no life is unkind
    my bumpy smoothness reminds.

    So I say friend
    let age not defend
    wisdom is in ends
    after lifes lived within.

    Merry Xmas and thanks for the birthday gift.


  • Abdul T Alishtari
    December 23, 2005
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    Dear disturbed. My niece sent me this IM "I love everyone. I love you all. Boy I'm acting silly. Later on I'll be embarassed. Screw it that is then and this is now. I love you guys. Ciao now."

    God bless you guys.


  • forgotten remedy
    December 23, 2005
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    yea, finding out boys didn't have cooties was a relief! i mean seriously...now i could hug my brother with no problem! lol i'm just kiddin! great write bro!
    ~mandy~

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