Tiny little toes upon your feet
a round head
deep blue eyes.
God's little creation
Just 2 months old
Yet so full of life
Amazement fills your eyes
All you see is a surprise
A little belly button popped out
Tiny little legs
As you fill my arms
My heart dances
Falling in love all over again
My sweet little baby
Brand new
With all my heart
I love you
Author notes
Written December 23rd, 2005
A contest entry
- Baby Steps by Shawnnessy.
300 points, ended June 9, 2006, 17 entries
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What did you think
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awww....such a cute little piece. thank you for entering and good luck.
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Ah..a wonderrful bliss is seen in the words..and touching the beauty of this life my friend..well done...
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this is really sweet!
i feel like this is a moment cut out in time. i can picture a mother and her baby alone in a quiet place. it's so intimate. so precious. i love how i feel drawn into this moment through your words and the arrangement of the lines. before i know it, i feel like i actually experienced it. you make it real with this piece.
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I have yet to have a child, but more than anything I wish to be a mother. A baby so fit so small, a quite distinct touch, a kiss on the forehead, a cry, a woo, how they are so tender, so warm, the unconditional feelings, the midnight feedings, the diaper changing, the long long nights, the early mornings, the daily rhymes, how they change you and how they change your life. The joy a child will bring, to open your heart and let them in, a creation from you and from him, so sweet, so innocent, delicate and pure.
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awe... I love it.. it's beautiful. It flows very nice. It such a cute write! I love the baby smell lol... nice job and thanks for the entry.
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AWWWWWWW how sweet. This is so awesome. Good write, that is so true though, everytime you put the baby down and then pick it back up you fall in love all over again. this is fills your mind with so many pictures because of the words. Good job and keep up the good work. Good luck in the contest and all you do in life.
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EXCELLENT
Wonderfull piece and so sweet. Thank you for entering my contest and good luck.
Ami
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I don't know how to do the rose I am sorry
Ami amour -
//rose
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Thank you
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Stunning - the love for your little one flows frm every word. You have truly been blessed with the biggest gift one can ever receive, the gift of a child! Enjoy!!! ~Naids~
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absolutely adorible. good write
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Thank you for your comment Have a great day
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4 stars * * * *
You as a great poet made the words dance in front of the reader’s eyes.
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This is adorable, just like the baby you describe. So nice to have you in the contest. Good Luck -Pome
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AHH!! LOVELY!! "Amazement fills your eyes, All you see is suprise" Wonderfull - so true and said perfect!
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