Christmas time is finally here
The most inspiring celebrations of the year
With praises of Christ the air is rent
Showers of blessings our Lord has sent
The old familiar carols that play
Ho! ho! ho! Its Christmas day
The golden bells that ring
Tons of presents Santa will bring
It’s the joyous season, so why frown?
Attractive sales are on everywhere in town
Its time for loads of fun
Reach out to everyone
The warmth of X-mas that chilly night
The Christmas tree that shines so bright
And of course the delicious plum cake
Little greeting cards children love to make
The festive spirit is in the air
Our joy, our hope let us all share
On this occasion supplant empty hearts
And enjoy the yummy X-mas tarts
Refrain from all sin and all wrong
X-mas is finally here after waiting so long!!!
Author notes
Written December 23rd, 2005
A contest entry
- Children's poems and stories (Gothic or otherwise) by yukitosumi.
300 points, ended October 31, 2006, 46 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - yet another christmas conetst are you tired of them yet? by Elvenfairy.
300 points, ended December 24, 2006, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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Great poem, making me wish I had money to shop some more! Good luck in the contest. Jeannie
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This was a great poem, made me want to rush out and start singing and shopping, though I got all my shopping done last night. This was very happy and nice. Thanks for entering my conetst. Merry Christmas and good luck to you!
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Read this rather late, summer is sapping our energy. Well done.
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4 Stars ****
I used to write "X'mas" instead of Christmas too, untill on of my wonderful friend asked me to stop writing "X'mas" instead of Christmas, 'cause writing in such way suggests that we use "X"(cross) instead of "Christ" !! i am not trying to act offended here, i am not at all offended, but then, i would request you to write "Christmas" as "Christmas" and not as "X'mas" ...
Dum da de do dum da dum!!
..your poem is nice again here, as if playing freely with words.. and with full spirit of Christmas... dancing away all the tiredness... a very happy happy nice nice write 
.. i like it
(i hope the emoticons works
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take cares and have a nice time my dear friend.. just keep it up... your humble little friend....
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... .... - vic ( who else? )
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Your rhyming in this poem is excellent! your imagery shows what Christmas is all about, you have left nothing out, I did enjoy reading this, thank you.
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Brilliant
ohh..I'm A Big Sucker For Rhyming poetry So Naturally This Pulled Me In. I Really Liked How it flowed And I Wish You The Best of Luck In The Contest! -Rachel -
A superb wirte up Sanya!
Your poem epitomises Christmas in all its beautiful colours and the credit goes to you for lighting up the atmosphere..thoughtful background too...cheers Shubs
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A fabulous write. God bless
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Beautiful and flowery.
Loved reading the poem.
Best wishes and good luck in the contest.
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This was a lovely entry
thank you for entering and Good Luck
Scarlet
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