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Fiends

~_ \\/ _~ Rangolius Vectre

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  • RangoliusVectre
    January 30, 2006
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    yea it was sorta intentional really. something that i want people to read. yet, to take in the words, to really see them.


  • Shantalina
    January 19, 2006
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    Wow, the light yellow font on the white background makes it very hard to read. I actually had to highlight it. You may want to fix that, unless it was intentional. But again, another excellent poem. I usually dont like short poems, most of the time they dont have enough detail to express what you want to read, but this one did. Very well written!

    Saddened Amber Eyes