Why cant you see that she's hurting?
Why cant you see that she's crying?
Why cant you see that she's dying inside?
The answer is that you dont want to see, do you?
You dont care.
Just like you couldn't care less if she lived or died, could you?
What if she's an angel sent straight down from Heaven to save you?
You wouldn't be able to tell because you keep pushing her away.
What if she loves you?
Would you love her?
Of course not, that would ruin your "reputation"
What reputation?
The one you have for hurting her?
Or the on you have for thriving off of her pain?
It would be a shame for you to end up falling for her, wouldn't it?
Well you want to know what?
She DOES love you, and she is trying to save you,
your just too blind to see.
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Written December 22nd, 2005
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Hey great poem!
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GREAT WRITE B!!! I absolutely felt ALL of the emotion you poured into each and every word. You're a great poet, you know that? Is this for/about "You-Know-Who"? Or maybe someone else? This isn't like what you talk about or write about him usually, so I was just wondering. My favorite line was ->
"What if she's an angel sent straight down from Heaven to save you?" <-
But you probably could've guessed that knowing me. Well, I'll TTYL! Great Write!
Love,
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i love it. bravo! it's great, really great. that's like a teen movie i saw. it's about a jock places a bet that he can get a geek to go out with a 'geek' and he wins but then starts to fall in love with her. but then she finds out about the bet and dumps him, but she means so much more than that, and then they fall in love. the end. this just reminded me of that. i really love it.
write more, cuz ur a fantastic writer. 
Lynne
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