I turn the knob to my serenity,
The sweet Harmony flows from the water.
It sends me into a trance and asks me to follow it.
I lead myself into its temptation.
I step into the steam and the hot water,
Like a shift in my body,
It feels as if you had entered me,
Like I was a virgin again.
Sending chills down my spine.
I let the hot water envelope my body
And lick away all of the dirt,
Sending it down the drain
All the stresses of work,
All the dilemmas of the day,
All the troubles,
Disappear with a single drop of peace
Letting the water glide over my body
I think of your hands
In tune with the waves
Tracing every line with your fingertips
Kissing me where the water lands
The steam, our breath
In silent lucidity,
In sync with our motions
Gathering the droplets
Amongst my skin.
I gently imagine
The soft caress of your skin
Against mine
Leaving an imprint
Within my head.
The gushing water heightening
The orgasmic experience within me
An internal battle to give me pleasure
The contagious feeling spreading across
My breast and down toward my stomach
And lashing against my back rising the hairs
Making me pant and sweat with exhilaration
Leaning down I release the water from its tension
Pieces of tranquility stick
To my slick body,
Loving it tenderly.
I step out,
Leaving it screaming for more
Author notes
This was the only thing that I could come up with because I got inspired while I was in the shower soooooo... this was the only thing and it says that you like erotica so... I thought you would love it!
HAPPY 26TH BIRTHDAY IOHGAH
YOU ARE A WONDERFUL POET!!! KEEP UP THE WONDERFUL WORK!!!!!
(and thanks for the invite!)
~:Kitten:~
Written December 22nd, 2005
A contest entry
- Iohagh's Birthday Party Over Here by Abdul T Alishtari.
300 points, ended December 25, 2005, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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This is amazing. Seriously..it takes showers to a completely different level. It's beautiful rather than erotic, it's just a memory of something that happened..rather than it happening at that time. That makes it the best...because of the beauty, rather than the erotic. People who read this..won't think "Ew this is too erotic" but "this is beautiful".
Great job, and I hope you got something for this poem! -
Fab poem very sensual and erotic. Love the orgasmic imagery. A real love poem.
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i love the visual this creates.
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back to you! I hope you liked it... but anyways thanks for your wonderful comment...
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Is the water masculine
defying gravity like vaseline
clinging to body wrestling
and ending up serene.
Thanks for your gift. Happy Xmas -
Great creativity
Great creativity on this piece,"your hands in tune with the waves" is a nice touch! nice theme also, hope you do more than well in the contest. -
DavesGor;0216 My niece sent me this IM "I love everyone. I love you all. Boy I'm acting silly. Later on I'll be embarassed. Screw it that is then and this is now. I love you guys. Ciao now."
God bless you guys. -
Thanks I hope she will love it... I pray that she will...
Thanks for holding this wonderful contest!
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Abdul Tawala Ibn Ali Alishtari
This is right up her alley and I am sure Iohagh my niece will love it.
Abdul Tawala Ibn Ali Alishtari
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