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Finding Myself

I'm lost inside myself
My vains are a maze
Don't know which direction to turn
Afraid of the on-lookers gaze
I'm empty and incomplete
Afraid of the fate i might meet
Who i may become i feel i can't control
There's a pit inside me, a gaint black hole
I try to fight it, i try to say no
But no matter what i say it continues to grow
I must find myself before it's to late
Before I become someone I hate

Author notes

This poem is really important to me because i'm going to be turning 17 soon and i'm having a hard time finding out who i truly am.
Written December 22nd, 2005

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  • December 23, 2005
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    great write ya its really hard 2 find yourself at any age i think but im only 13 but still i dunno. great write keep it up

  • SoACTing
    December 22, 2005
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    hey that was a great poem...thanks for sharing. im 16 turnin 17 too in a bit..scary as hell knowing everything yet nothin all at the same time. i hope all goes well and good luck with everything. ur an awesome writer!!