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The Exotic Fairy With Emerald Eyes

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A thousand years and deep inside
the mysteries are still alive
carried here from far off lands
far beyond the sea and sand
a place that’s lost amid the mists
a place where fairy dust exists.


 

Heralded by the rising moon
across the dreamy starry sky
upon a fire-winged dragon flew
an exotic fairy with emerald eyes!


 

Deep into that fearful night
I crossed into her fiery domain
and heard the din of fairy war
from deep within a volcanic core.


 

She brandished there a brazen sword
inlaid with emeralds and tempered steel
and all the dangers she ignored
and to the battle racing toward
made the night air seem unreal.


 

Long they fought, long it raged
fairies fell and fairies waged
their hellish nightmare of the night
and on into the following day.


 

The battle done, the battle won
I found my way unto the plains
among the fairy dead I spied
the exotic fairy with emerald eyes!


 

I dress her wounds, quenched her thirst,
and upon the battlefield there burst
her fairy love, her fairy man,
and in his eyes soft tears began.


 

He held her tight, she offered a smile,
then fell into a peaceful sleep.
Her fairy man then thanked me there
and gave me fairy dust to keep.


 

As they flew off, I marveled thus
at what has just transpired there-
an exotic fairy with emerald eyes
carried back to a dragon’s lair
the fairy war, the fairy man
who held the exotic fairy’s hand
and thanked me with this fairy dust.


 


 

Disbelieve me, if you must.
I don’t think you would understand-
you’d dismiss me quite off-hand
if I offered you my fairy dust!


 

 


 

 


 

 


 

 


 


 

Author notes

Something you may never have received before, Iohagh, a fairy story! From me and my tiny little AP sister Exotic Fairy! Happy Birthday!
Written December 22nd, 2005

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  • wbiro gold member
    December 27, 2005
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    I'm glad you weren't disappointed today, Ms. Princess! lol


  • faerieprincess
    December 27, 2005
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    Did you think that I could possibly pass this one by? I don't think that I have read a more beautiful story about faeries. An enchanting story about an enchanting time. Written with power and grace. A genuine pleasure to read! So very,very gifted and talented.
    fp ~;~


  • Celticmoon
    December 25, 2005
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    I don't believe I have read a more beautiful birthday poem than you have here my dear. I am certain my niece Iohagh adores it as much as I do. I thank you for giving her such a wonderful gift on her birthday.



    Blessings
    Bel


  • wbiro gold member
    December 25, 2005
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    thanks Chii, and Merry Christmas!


  • Iohagh
    December 25, 2005
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    I won't brandish spears
    no swords no dear
    my gun would appear
    winning all victories here.

    If you aren't married
    then someone has tarried
    such artistic soul nary
    with such expanse aerie.

    Thanks for your gift. Happy Xmas


  • Abdul T Alishtari
    December 23, 2005
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    Wibiro My niece sent me this IM "I love everyone. I love you all. Boy I'm acting silly. Later on I'll be embarassed. Screw it that is then and this is now. I love you guys. Ciao now."

    God bless you guys.


  • December 23, 2005
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    The best of the best!

    Wow, brother! I can not describe the beauty and the wonders of this poem! The adventure, the suspense, the way it is arranged, the beautiful rhymes you have! It is so spectacular that I think, this is the best of the best and the best and the best!!!!!!!!!!!! This is a winning entry, and you should get gold for this! If you will not gold, the fairy will brandish that brazen sword!
    Soooooooooo beautiful, so amazing, so lovely, and so magical!
    I love it so much my dear brother!


  • December 23, 2005
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    thank you ^^

    i love the poem ^^ thanks


    ~~Exotic Fairy~~


  • cloven gold member
    December 23, 2005
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    awsome write, great imigary and fealing. i loved it


  • whispersoftly
    December 23, 2005
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    wow this is b eautiful what a wonderful write well done Wayne and Exotic Fairy very pretty and nice descriptions wonderful xx Cheryl

  • Iohagh
    December 23, 2005
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    This is in my birthday contest. Wow, its going to take hours just looking at the breathtaking spectacle. I am speechless but I will come back on my birthday. Ciao now.


  • Mystical-Gardenia
    December 23, 2005
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    Excellent beautifully crafted!!

    Awesome!! Magnificently crafted... woven by a true weaver of words Truly a balm to the soul this is a magnficent tribute not only to another yet, in the words that you have woven have become a tribute to your amazing talent the pictures are the perfect accompaniament Brava!! Most excellent... alas, I am out of applause and this piece is so deserving Wishing you much success and a joyous Holiday Season to you and yours


  • Norea
    December 23, 2005
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    lovely poem. i loved it. it's deep and thought filled. great write and thanks for sharing.
    Nana Nichole

  • Abdul T Alishtari
    December 23, 2005
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    Abdul Tawala Ibn Ali Alishtari

    You are a genius. Hope she likes it. Iohagh says she's going to read all this and I think there are 30 already. She has no idea how much people like her for what she did for others for free. That is usually how it is. Good people think well anyone would do it. Remember the Good Samaritan never left his name. Anyway wonderful well multi-media gift. Cool

    Abdul Tawala Ibn Ali Alishtari

  • kwallycat
    December 23, 2005
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    I love the beautiful pics to go along with the beautiful poetry. I can see it all in my mind. It was very beautiful. I wish that I could write ryming poetry like this!


  • LxSER
    December 22, 2005
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    Killer write wbiro. I love the imagery and the rymth. Very cool. And the pictures are awsome too.

    LxSER


  • Pollywog
    December 22, 2005
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    wow... this one blows mine completely out of the water! I hate mine now... Yours is so good... It kept me interested till the very end... I want to take mine out of the contest now... This one was amazing... as was the picture you placed in here... This was awesome! Keep up the good work!!! I loved it!
    ~:Kitten:~


  • UnchartedPoet
    December 22, 2005
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    I did so enjoy this read, I felt as if I was being read an actual fairy tale......loved the flow, your verse was with so much ease while reading, you almost want it all to be real....happy to have been captured by this wonderful tale, thanks for the read and sharing....good luck in the contest
    Jen


  • bedazzled
    December 22, 2005
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    This really defines good fantasy poetry! I loved it, hope you have a merry Christmas


  • felicitisdancer
    December 22, 2005
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    excellent

    i want fairy dust........i imagine it would just have to sparkle and make for a wonderful sneeze....good poem and great images...i enjoyed the artwork, would love to be a supporting member but i teach kids who have so little and i give everything i can to them with the thought that just maybe 13 lives can be better if i go with out the extras in life........but i sure do looking at everyone elses.......alot


  • pure zen
    December 22, 2005
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    good.

    Liked the story. It was well written and discriptive. Words were well chosen and the flow was good. A suggestion I may have is to maybe pick a consistant rhyming patern, cause its a bit all over the place. But thats so minor that its really not evident. Great job.


  • Blue Eyed Skies
    December 22, 2005
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    Lovely pics to compliment lovely words. You have a flair for the dramatic and a talent for the old style of writing. I'd love to read a children's book written by someone with your style. Well done!


  • suseann
    December 22, 2005
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    y

    You've certainly out done your talented self in great flowing whimsical verses nefew! And the grafics are so beautiful a match for this master poetic work! Loved it!~~Suseann
    Edited on Dec 22, 11:13 p.m. because ''.


  • wbiro gold member
    December 22, 2005
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    Thank you kindly, my favorite niece!


  • Ishtar
    December 22, 2005
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    Oh btw, I love the pictures...especially the one on the top.


  • wbiro gold member
    December 22, 2005
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    no, I didn't read yours... hmmm... something is in the air, methinks... lol or maybe 'achoo!'

  • Ishtar
    December 22, 2005
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    Oh darn! This is by far the most entertaining poem I have read all day. The flow is so beautiful and the rhyme is as smooth flowing as water.
    Every stanza is filled with so much beauty and your words are penned with such grace.
    The story line...absolutley fabulous. I loved it. I just imaged this whole picture book.
    Well done dearest uncle!

    Good luck in the contest.

    Your eternally blooming niece,
    -Reni


  • Night Hope gold member
    December 22, 2005
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    'A thousand years and deep inside the mysteries are still alive carried here from far off lands far beyond the sea and sand a place that’s lost amid the mists a place where fairy dust exists...' roflmao Wayne... Did you already read mine??? If not, go read it & you'll see why I'm laughing...very cool, Poet... Wanda

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