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Lost for you

Vulnerable and broken
healing from the light
so brown and mesmerizing
seducing
like a forbidden sin that I must have
and call my own
yearning for belonging
to you

I crave to be held
to feel secure
to feel like yours
complete

intertwining in our passion
to beautiful for words
leaving me breathless
in another world
high
for it's not just lust

lost in the midst
forgetting that I am porcelain
as you crack me with just the tone of your voice
or the intent of your touch
how is it that you can cure me
with the thing that tears me apart
just make it better
force me to face my fears
vulnerable and broken
from the brown light that cuts through me

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Written December 22nd, 2005

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  • StarWarsJunkee
    January 6, 2006
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    dis be's good! i "lurve" you!
    ~skywalker


  • bloodislikewine
    December 24, 2005
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    Wow. I remember the whole thing with looking him in the eyes. I wouldn't worry, Love. I will let you know what I think of that in the im I am about to send you. This is so beautiful. I don't know what to say, it makes me want to hug you and tell you it'll be okay. Cause it will. I miss you lots.
    with all my ♥
    Natasha


  • Osiris Ra
    December 22, 2005
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    Interesting read.


  • Kagome0963
    December 22, 2005
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    Hmmmmmmmmmmm, the backround fits the poem. I love it, it's beautifully sad........ It's wonderful......