I can’t find the right words to say to you
So I’ll take the coward’s way out, like so many do
With a knife, with a gun, with a rope, I don’t care
As long as I can’t feel, I don’t care
You don’t love me anymore
At least not like you did before
I wish I could erase some things I’ve said
Now the empty words resound in my head
Heh, I guess I love you more than I though
Now I spend all my time distraught
I don’t even know why I’m writing this to you
Maybe it’s because I don’t love many, but you are one of the few
I love you for teaching my to believe in myself when no one else would
At times you probably doubted you could
You probably won’t think anything of this letter
But by having it all out, I’ll feel better
I thought you were my friend
I thought you said, “I’ll love you until the end.”
Author notes
This is for the break up that I recently went through...a few months ago...it has gotten better but I wrote this when I felt it truly. Cheers mates...
Written November 30th, 2005
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Sorry about the last comment I have been a kind of deppress the last few weeks....A hurt time ..
But, now I can really said that I like your poem ..the sadness and despair..consuming every last virtue in the soul leaving the coward to do the dirty work...jajaja..
the broken dream and misery....love it .....
Please don't stop....
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Tears of blood stain my flesh..
Some how I relate to this poem ...at this moment ....
I know all and every single feeling of your poem my Dear girl..
Yo tambien pense que me amaba hasta el final.. -
I like Evanesence too their singer is beautiful and talented and their songs haunting.... everybody should believe in themselves
good to get things out in poetry!
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this is really good.i usually don't like poems that rhyme but this shows a lot of emotion and i loved that.i'm glad everything is better though.great write.
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