So many can have
what I can't have.
So many can love
what I'll never love.
And yet,
they don't.
Author notes
I intended this to be short to make a statement. I am unable to have my own biological children. For that, I am against abortion . . . because it allows those that are able to have children to choose whether or not to have a child. What is crazy is that most insurance companies will provide coverage for birth control and abortions, but they won't cover infertility treatments.
Written December 22nd, 2005
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good point well made XxoxX
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Hmm. This is short and to the point. I find it original and meaningful in its simplicity. So I'd say it's a good poem
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straight to the point.not bad
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So heartbreaking.. I agree so greatly. This was even more sad and heart stopping because of how short you kept it. You are right.. it made it even more thoughtful and touching. I am so sorry about what you have said here.. I would not be able to take it if I could not have kids.. I dont know yet if I have the same misfourtune, but I understan how you feel because I can already feel the pain when I even think about the possibility. It is a crying shame that so many people have this blessing yet they choose to take it for granted.
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Very short powerful poem! Excellent!! this was very 'eye-opening' excellent work! good luck in the contest!!
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this brought tears to my eyes, I will tell you why in an IM, its to personal to post for all to see, this was really a great peice, it says so much in only a few words. It had me in tears, I said that already. I am so emotional at the moment. Thanks for telling me about this, i am glad that I got a chance to read it, good luck in the contest, I hope that you win. GREAT write. xxx QueenT ooo
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You're quite right.This is an auwful thing to do.
It's a great poem.Kids are God's blessings and we should appreciate them.
Shahrzad
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