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As Long As God Desires, My Love

As long as the rivers run free in Israel’s garden designed by God
As long as memories, of destined love, can be arranged by His rod
Just so long as destiny’s plans are carried out by His Angels on high
Even as God created an oasis in the desert land of Israel, by and by

I’m following my heart, given to our Father, as He leads me to you-
See His glory "rise and shine" on His platform designed, for us two
Despite each wall of defence, the Bright-&-Morning Star is our guide
Cause you see, regardless of the odds, in His Rainbow dream we'll abide

Beside still crystal waters our Shepherd leads from harm, that we rest
Hear the angels sing “of the glory of the King,” cause God knows best  
Gifts of creativity are majestically woven in translucent shades of gold
Life will blossom beyond our imagination, as the greatest love-story told

Author notes

The Chinese have a proverb about such love, for destiny: "An invisible red thread connects those destined to meet, regardless of time, place, or circumstance," the saying goes. "The thread may stretch or tangle, but never break." www.chinasprout.com/html/column32.html

Written December 22nd, 2005

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    Thank you for being my friend Jasminerose, Hugs, Mill

  • Reframing-Quill
    December 23, 2005
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    If only you knew “how your words fall like rain” on this seemingly dry and thirsty soul. Blessed be the God of Abraham, Isaac, and Jacob, and may his blessing be on “you and yours (this wonderful Christmas and all New Year).” Oh how I appreciate your kindness and thoughtful ‘best wishes.’ Thank you, from the depths of my heart-&-soul.

    ~*Milly *~

  • Reframing-Quill
    December 23, 2005
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    Well- “Kathy,” coming from one with so much heart and talent, I don’t know what to say. Gracious words-, so endearing (among the honourable), can seem to ever echo down the “heart’s corridors, filling each room, forever. How benevolent of you to lift my heart with humble gratitude. I'm deeply moved; thank you Kathy.

    ~*Milly *~


  • poet2angels gold member
    December 22, 2005
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    This is so beautiful,Milly!...The flow as well as the lovely words make this a truly beautiful poem!..Good luck in the contest!....Lynda


  • AngelEyes323
    December 22, 2005
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    beautiful & inspiring

    I hope you win this contest because your words hold such beauty. The chinese proverb is beautiful as well. Maybe I was destined to find this poem because it's what I need right now. I have been inspired LOL

    thank you for sharing your talent

    `Kathy

  • Reframing-Quill
    December 22, 2005
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    How very gracious of you to say so. Actually, I find that my mind works faster than I can create and I often post before discovery my mistakes. Sorry you had to see mine. Be that as it may, it was while listening to the famous and most brilliant "El Divo Ancora" that inspired me to create this. Now I look forward to enjoying the diversified talents of ones entered in your brilliant contest. Thank you, so very much.

    ~*Milly *~

    Edited on Dec 23, 1:24 because ''.


  • Heavenly Angel silver member
    December 22, 2005
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    Oh how very beautifully and wonderfully written! I very much enjoyed reading this, my friend! It is awesome and I am very pleased you chose to share it with me in this contest! Good luck to you, sweetie

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