Stop pretending it's all okay, cause once you die it ll all be the same
Everyone will look down on you, and they will know it was just a game
They will know you played them for a fool, and hurt them again once more
They ll wonder where the princess went, the one they had once adored
The one who made them smile, and all the pain they had to go away
The one who helped them see, that there is always another day
Now that princess is long gone, to never walk back through the door
because you couldn't help yourself, she was your little whore
Shell never smile laugh or cry, because of what you have done
Her bones and blood have all went dry, because her lack of self control was taken down to none
Shes seen so much in her life, she doesn't care what to do
She handed you her heart, And put her trust onto you
You took her heart, ripped it in half, and now she is gone into the abyss
Because you couldn't help the fact it was you that no one would miss
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Written December 22nd, 2005
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i really actually think this may be my favourite poem ever, so fucking brilliant you are like my new idol xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx WOW
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I loved the story that this piece told, and the strong hatred expressed in this lines. The rhyme is well done as well.
I was a bit confused at first about who the 'princess' is. Actually I still am.
At first I thought this poem was directed towards the princess.. but when I got to the end I got the impression it was directed to someone else who destroyed the princess.... or did the princess destroy her self? I am confused about that.
If the poem is directed to a person who destroyed the princess (i.e. 3 descreet people) then I'd like that the most. Otherwise it is a bit schizophrenic.
in any event.. powerful emotions.. good rhyme.... a touch confusing.
also "shes" needs an apostrophe.
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WOW lots of emotion coming formt his and it was constant and keeped me intersted great job
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