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Lingering Thoughts Of A Broken Heart

You Had Your Way
You Heard My Cries
Don't Say You Love Me
Just Say Goodbye

Don't Strain My Soul
Don't Black My Eyes
Those Memories
Shall Die Tonight

My Hopes Are Ashes
My Love Is Smoke
Feelings For You
No More

These Hallways Are Dark
What Is It That You Hide?
Is There Something Obscure
In The Back Of Your Mind?

Don't Strain My Soul
Don't Black My Eyes
Those Memories
Shall Die Tonight

All I Know
All I Feel
A Void In Me
Seems Unreal

Author notes

this is a song.. as you can see the verses that repeat is the chorus =)
Written December 22nd, 2005

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  • sustaind
    December 23, 2005
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    love it!


  • suicideRain
    December 22, 2005
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    my heart was left
    don't do you'r best
    I forgot how to live
    Don't cry over me?


    here's a verse hope ya like it hope it helps! ^_^ oh by the way nice poem

  • sustaind
    December 22, 2005
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    you had your way,you heard my cries