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Never(Revised)

I never said never
Never did I regret
the lies that I told you
and every time I hurt you
The only regret was what came to be
Apologies are useless
So I'll say I'm sorry no more
If I was truly sorry I would have never done it
So now I finally see
Everything was to blame
but only on me
So just remember
I never said never
Never did I regret

Author notes

This still probably needs some work but oh well. I liked my other Never better though, for some odd reason.
Written December 22nd, 2005

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  • Ghost531
    January 23, 2006
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    Thanks

    I'm glad you liked this poem. The opening and closing lines are the lines that got me to write "Never" and this one that I revised. I only revised this one because the other one, to some people, had too many nevers; but I think there is no such thing. I also redid it because I had a whole other idea for where and what my poem was/could cover(subject wise). Anyway thanks for the lovely comments and applauses. I greatly appreciate it. I think I may fav. you. TTYL SINcerly -Amanda*


  • DeAnges
    January 23, 2006
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    Great write

    I love the opening/closing lines of this poem and the way you neatly brought it around full circle from those line to those lines. They open the poem smoothly and close it just as smoothly without leaving the reader feeling like there should be something more. Very well written, not too complicated, and good flow. Great job


  • Cheeky paper
    December 24, 2005
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    I have no idea about this but here's a great poem already , i love it when you made it short and meanningful .. Wonderful written and beautiful done! keep on writing and if u re-edit this poem just let me know i'd love to read over it again ..
    - papergirl

  • Ghost531
    December 24, 2005
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    Thank you

    Actually this poem has nothing to do with Erika. I didn't really cause the break up. Her father did. It was more then fun while it lasted actually...But I'm not getting into that. Talk to you later. Thanks for the comment. SINcerly -Amanda*


  • pugsleyislove
    December 23, 2005
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    Sad

    I likes. Good write love. I have a feeling this is about Erika. Well, don't worry about her. I suppose it was fun while it lasted. Ttyl.

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