comfort me,
when i get scared.
hold me,
and take away all my fears.
love me,
like no else has done.
find me,
tell me where i belong.
kiss me,
make feel loved
remember me,
what we have become
what memories we have once made
the new ones we will make today.
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Written December 22nd, 2005
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awwwwww. cute
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hey i need your number i forgot
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I like it
It's really cute and a sweet poem. Kind of what love should be like, or what we wish it would be.
Keep on writing
~Ibar~ -
wow this is pretty deep!
i like it alot
"great job here!
This is a very beautiful and wonderful poem,
one of this best
The imagery was strong and very vivid and the flow was smooth from start to finish.
I love the emotion put into this piece it really lets the readers mind just
kinda wonder and set up the scene in there mind.
Excellent job! -
Great excellent poem
Hey,
This is areally good write girl.
It is very cute.
I really like it.
You always have something good to write about.
I miss u both.
Love you.
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