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committing

its the feeling i get every time i wake
A longing for you to be next to me
the silence in the morning i cant take


by now i suspect my veins have gone dry
And there's no telling when you'll come back
But the not knowing wont let me cry


It was supposed to be just me and you
Though i am still praying I don't have to let you go
i only thought that because that's what you said too


i never told anyone about all of my fears
but for you my pain keeps flowing like an open cut
you're the only one who had ever kissed away my tears

you're just scared of fully committing

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Written December 22nd, 2005

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  • Xxhpg fluffywuffyxx
    February 15, 2006
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    HOLA. how are you? Im bored. and at school. PEACE


  • Def Poet 42o
    February 10, 2006
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    pretty cool poem,and I love You More...:-*...I miss u,kitty kat!!!
    Much love:
    Chris

  • Lost Spirit
    January 13, 2006
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    wow that is kinda sad....i wish there was something i could do to help...but a good write and the rhyme is great.


  • Samantha Slaughter
    December 29, 2005
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    This has a great flow Kat... really like it... shh (it reminds me of jonathon ^.~) great write keep up the great work ^.^
    XosammioX


  • bigbear21
    December 24, 2005
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    wow it makes a me alittle sad but its good


  • sustaind
    December 22, 2005
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    nice write,commitment almost rymes with control,lol

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