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the divine comedy

God is sitting on his throne in heaven,
he just bought a hd ready tv,
looks at the programs made by humans,
meant to entertain and spellbind us all.

God flips the channels and comes upon a reality TV,
he looks with interest as it shows him you and me.
he wonders what makes us so stupid doing what we do,
God flips another channel and smile a big smile.

He comes across a porno movie full of silicone and face lift,
starts to shake of laughter and thunders hits the sky
humans start to fear as tsunamis hits them,
and they all as one starts to scream why?

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Written December 22nd, 2005

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  • February 16, 2006
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    Excellent

    lmao, I love this story :-). It really does make me wonder as to what God does think of us? Great job


  • victoria Secret
    January 7, 2006
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    oh boy. Funny write ~Tori~


  • requiempoet gold member
    January 1, 2006
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    ha ha ha that made me giggle, I actually wonder what God thinks because humans....they suck


  • d-amour gold member
    December 22, 2005
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    he he he i must agree :-)
    how is life by the way? me and solrun have discussed inviting you to norway. BTW do you got messenger?

  • urbanfaeri
    December 22, 2005
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    looove it!

    LOL! excellent! i wonder what he'll do when he gets to the nature channel!


  • HaleyMary
    December 22, 2005
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    Kind of funny. Interesting idea of God laughing and causing the weather to change. Good write.

  • d-amour gold member
    December 22, 2005
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    thanks thats apreciated :-)


  • just that girl
    December 22, 2005
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    HAHAHA!!!! thats great! really funny! i like it alot!!! ^_^

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