SEDUCER:
"I will persuade,
gently,
one by one,
the men of
your town...
to engorge themselves
upon their
s t r a n g e,
s e c r e t
fantasies,
..yet unbeknownst to their hearts -
swimming deep within the murky,
unlit seas
of the subconscious.
They shall ride with me,
o'er the mountains,
upon the unleashed lions
that are their sexual prowess..."
The women look on in fear as the children stare wide-eyed, unaware of the perversion at hand.
The hearty and deepening laughs of the seducer penetrate the air.
Author notes
Written December 22nd, 2005
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Seductor! HAHAHA!
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Wheezal00ne!
The first words of the Seducer remind me of Sodom and Gomorrah. I'm not really sure what the second part reminds me of, but all I know is that I love this piece. The imagery is so rich and dark, with a taste of taintedness.
I'm lovin' it! HAHAHA! =)
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Hmmm...a very interesting poem. Like the layout and flow of the first part of the poem--then it didn't seem to flow as nicely...but the expression was still good.
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Thank you! I appreciate it.
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That was a different write. Kind of strange, but I liked it. Keep up the good work.
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