Cold winds quill when
Your warm breath grazes
My frostbitten skin
Ripe with fresh snow
And like snowflakes
No two touches are alike
Author notes
Written December 22nd, 2005
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A contest entry
- Contest: *~All Things Magickal~* by Miss Faerie.
300 points, ended June 12, 2006, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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this is a nicely written poem! i love the flow it jsut goes so well! and your background is really cool and trippy hehe
good luck in the contest!
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I love the way you put this together!
The picture and background go so well with this poem.
Thank you for sharing this and I wish you the best of luck in this contest! Keep up the great work.
Allen0826
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Just... wow. You really know how to get and keep attention don't you? Short, sweet and to the point, yet fragile... it's just gorgeous
Thank you so much for entering love and good luck in the contest
Shari
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awsome
this is an awsome poem and i really like it!!! -
such excellence emphasized in such little...the music fufills the poem to ease...much love -Miss. Raneika Thanks
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Such exquisite simplicity.
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I like the elegant simplicity of this piece. I've never pondered the idea that no two touches are alike before now. I shall have to pay more attention to this in future. Thank you for that thought...
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this appears to have a very deep meaning contained within so few words, I get a real sense of love coming from it but I dont know why.... mmmm I will have to think
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I'm not sure if you got my message, but i added audio to it. piano
any time i edit a contest poem i make sure to advise the holder -
I added an audio component to it. minor update
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i just had to read this again today
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beautiful
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I like the way you wrote this! You made it short,sweet, and straight to the point. I love that in a poem sometimes. I also like the way you can just see what you're speaking of as you read it. I loved it! Keep up the great work! I also wish you the best in the contest!
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Ooooh the poem makes me feel cold, imagining someone breathing down my neck... Sexy yet conforting! Well done, keep writing! All the best
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Enchanting!
Hey! I like this alot! It has a magical touch to it.
You're good at creating moods within your writings.
This is a talent which you should be very proud of.
Your background choice was brilliant and only added
depth and dimension. A very enchanting poem!
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thank you so much Nimuee, that really warms my heart. I had trouble picking an image but finally settled on the tempest picture.
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lovely writing here
Oh this is beautifully simple, and breathtakingly spiritual.
One of those situations where I say to myself "I wish I
had written that!" I especially like the final line...
Lovely writing here.
Good luck and thank you for entering. ~ crisstiena
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SHort and all the same really vivid. Amazingly done.
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o0oh this is a darling of a breeze. short and again sweet. I think I like your short poems the best. you have a way with minimal amounts of words. no wonder you teach editing!
now onto the aesthetics:
perfect background and nice choice of image. colours work well too. overall pleasing to the eye and perfect for the message. the stars almost look like diamond snowflakes. clever choices
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