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My Promise

Believe in the hope,
the faith, the promise.
Our love is unmeasured,
our bond strong upon us.

From that first, "Hello,"
I knew you were mine.
To have and to hold
until the end of all time.

I came from a home
with barely a heart.
Our love may not be much
but of course it's a start.

We could start a family
with kids of our own.
Or maybe just our bond
would make our house a home.

You might think I'm silly,
a romantic mess.
But if my future's with you,
I couldn't care less.

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Written December 21st, 2005

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  • Reframing-Quill
    December 22, 2005
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    Wow, there's a lot of intellectual influence with this creative love muse. Very well done. I can really appreciate “such an intricate Tapestry of Love's design.” Thanks for sharing this one.

    ~*Milly *~


  • Heavenly Angel silver member
    December 21, 2005
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    A beautifully sweet write of the love you hold deep in your heart! Thank you so much for sharing! This is very well done and I much enjoyed reading it!