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Dark Already (Haiku)





Night falls so early
Four o'clock, and sun has set
Bright moon brings such peace




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Option 2
Written December 21st, 2005

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  • TheSpiralGenerator
    February 15, 2006
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    Really nicely written haiku you have here. Thanks for entering and good luck.

    -Sadien

  • Ir.muse
    December 23, 2005
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    wow...A great haiku.Really well penned.
    Shahrzad


  • MagicLady silver member
    December 22, 2005
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    The moon really reflects on the snow and brightens everything up. I like the dark with yellow colors that you picked. If you give your poem some space before and after, it will present better. Like this:


    Night falls so early
    Four o'clock, and sun has set
    Bright moon brings such peace




    Your words don't run into everything else. This works well with short form poetry.

    Thanks for your entry.
    Cheryl