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Love

Helplessly
  I fall in love with you
Honestly
  You embraced me in your arms
Passionately
  You kissed me
Peacefully
  You held me closer
Faithfully
  I made love to you
In this restless world
  Where love is just a word
  Where faking is just another stain
  Where do I stand in these lies?
  Hoping to find one true love....
Everyday I dream of you
  Seeing you in my endless night
  Chasing you after the shadows
  Touching you
  Kissing you
In this silence
  I shared my fears
With you
  I fear no one
Silence
  I shall be

Author notes

This poem was written by my close friend who i told that she had to try and see how people would react to her poetry. Enjoy everybody.
Written December 21st, 2005

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  • Scripts
    February 9, 2006
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    I loe this it is very well written and shows range of emotions. Keep up the good work.
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  • Lady Eclipse
    December 21, 2005
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    Wow powerfully put. I liked the fact that it was in free verse. To me they seem much more meaningful when they are written like that because it allows you to express your feelings how they are and not forced to rhyme. I love the emotion in this peice just jumping off the page. Wonderful job.. ~Lady Eclipse
    Edited on Dec 21, 8:53 p.m. because ''.