You said that you were different
Than the guys that I knew
You said you weren't hurtful,
Cruel, or untrue
You learned about my past
Of guys I knew before
What they had done
That I was wounded and sore
But you lifted my head
When I let it down
You made me feel like a queen
With a beautiful crown
I haven't known you that long
But it feels like forever
Each moment with you
Makes my world so much better
So just know that when I look at you
It's more than just a look
It's so much more than that
Because it's my breath away you took
Author notes
Written October 20th, 2005
A contest entry
- Are You My Future? by Heavenly Angel.
300 points, ended January 5, 2006, 14 entries
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nice piece of writing, i like it...
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Oooh how very pretty this is, sweetie! I very much enjoyed this piece as its' written with a lot of heart and soul! Thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest!
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