Once a little lamb lay weary
Not as fast as all the rest
Born of a simpler stature
Not to cope among the best
One day the Sheperd found her
Un-nourished, close to death
The Sheperd's eyes grew teary
As He clutched her to his chest
The Sheperd drew compassion
From compassions holy well
And the little lamb saw love
As her plight had been dispelled
That little lamb loved her Sheperd
After being so hard pressed
Somehow the Sheperd saw in her
That she was special amongst the rest
Oh, what love to know the Sheperd
To know true love's divine
How for one sick, stray he'll wander
Out from the ninety-nine
Author notes
Just blending an idea I had, thoughts of a friend, and two Bible stories together. I hope it came out o.k.
Written July 20th, 2005
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Good write
This is a nice piece that u have typed on here.
God Bless you
Take care and Keep writing
Stuner
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The flow in this was amazing, I just loved the simplicity of it and your word choice was great - you should be very proud of this.
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Thanks for your comments on my poem. I'm glad you did because I really enjoyed this one. It's so true *smile*
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*rocks on feet* i like that you rhyme *drool* and i like the content of your poetry...i like this poem...it'd be nice to believe i think. *twirls* nice work -christa
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I like this, it's really well written and professional. Short and sweet. And with meaning.
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aww this is very sweet. i can feel the emotion put it to this. its very well written!
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