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The Future of My Heart

You are the future of
my heart and I want to
tell you that you are
so beautiful to me.
Your heart is full of
love and your eyes are
full of glee.  Sometimes
you take the time to
read poetry to me.  You
always know what to say
and know how to make me
smile.  You're the nicest
guy I've known for quite
a while.  I can't help
but tell you that you
are the best ever man.
I want to tie you up and
throw you in my van.  It
would be the best kidnap
ever, the best of the year.
But I can't do it anymore
cause you have the biggest
fear.  The fear of being
taken away which is a fear
we share.  You know how much
I'd love you, I'd know you
really care.  I love you so
much babycakes, even though
for all my mistakes, I've
ruined a lot with us, but
I know that in the end,
we'll be together again.  You
are my past, present and
future.  I love you.

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Written December 21st, 2005

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  • Ur The Perfect Drug
    July 23, 2006
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    dang hes lucky...i muss say the ending moved me the most


  • Vickie J
    January 3, 2006
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    Very moving and filled with love-there seems to be some unspoken parts that remain a mystery, but that serves to make this more intriguing. Nicely done! Best wishes in the contest!~vj


  • misticmoonlite gold member
    December 21, 2005
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    love is a wonderous feeling poetry has special meanings and brings the depth of love to ones inner soul.. thank you for sharing..Linda


  • Heavenly Angel silver member
    December 21, 2005
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    Oooh this is so sweetly and wonderfully written! Sounds like you've found the one to share your future for sure! Thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest!