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My Wish was you

The future is still uncertain; I know not where I'll be.
But in the past few weeks I've prayed that you will be with me.
My love has grown from day to day, I miss you more and more.
If love is hurting while apart, no wonder my heart is sore.

I hold you close within my heart and in my arms you lie.
I cannot help the way I feel, nor do I wish to try.
One thing I know the future brings each and every day.
I love you more and more, my love, in each and every way.  

The future holds uncertain thoughts and wonderment abound.
But I love you with all my heart and will always be around.
You need not fear the future, for I will be with you.
I cannot help the way I feel, but the way I feel is true...

I hope someday that you will see the way my soul lies still.
For all the love within my heart is strong and it is real.
Someday I hope to make you mine, for the future of my life.
And everyday I hope and pray that you will be my wife.

This is just a simple plea, a simple wish of mine.
That you will be with me until the end of time.
I know that this is asking much, but much I do desire.
I know you may not understand, but my heart is on fire.

Each time I am with you, each time I hold you tight,
I wonder if it will be my last and if I have the right.
For I am just a simple man and live a simple life.
I only pray to God each night that you will be my wife.

I cannot find the words to say that will make you mine.  
I only have one simple plea, to ask for all time.  
If all the words came rolling down, as water in the sea,
None would ever be the same as "will you marry me?"

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Written December 21st, 2005

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  • OFtheMOON16
    January 22, 2006
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    wow!!! i wish i had a guy who would write like that... i know what it feels like... whoever your with is lucky and should appreciate you with all her heart... this is really good, and i love it! good job!

    firespirit


  • kittykatface
    December 30, 2005
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    This poem was so amazing and hits so close to home, not just for me I bet, but for everyone... because we've all loved someone with all our heart that we didn't feel like we could go on or live or breath anymore because we just wanted to have them so badly... and you conveyed this so wonderfully, thank you.

    --Anna--


  • WrapMeUpTight
    December 21, 2005
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    awwwww.....this is amazing....wow....it is so beautifully written....it just speaks so much emotion.....the flow is so amazing!!!! This is one of the best poems i have read in a long time....the longing for someone you fear wont always be there hurts so bad that you dont want to even deal with it....ive figured this out....but this write is amazing!!

    Always
    Bridget