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Morning Sun / Shadow Acrostic

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Morning Sun

Moving above the horizon beginning to forM
Orange glow, beautiful enough for a photO
Red, pink, yellow will mainly always appeaR
Night disappears as I watch the rising suN
Inching its way higher, always so bright I
Need dark glasses as it's move has beguN
Gracing the clouds with it’s colors forminG.

Sitting by the water I am in awe as the cloudS
Uniting with colors so beautiful they dazzle yoU
Never am I bored with watching the morning SuN.

Author notes

Picture was supplied by my friend Bud who is a member here on AP, he has some wonderful scenes taken from his hometown of Escabana. Thank you Bud.
allpoetry.com/poets/budlem  Bud writes the most spiritual poems I have even read, he is in touch with the Spirit realm, just as I am.
Written December 21st, 2005

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  • jenelda silver member
    January 6, 2006
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    AWWWWWW, see, another comment I missed, yeah, I had to write on the title I was given, didn't give me much room to create, and I'm hopeless with nature.give me LOVEones any day. lovesya my little chickadee your pluff pluff spongey doll
    Jenni loves VIC


  • eternalpoet
    January 4, 2006
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    5 Stars *****

    hey jenn.. i have never seen such an acrostic before, well i liked this poem, but i must say that i liked the form more.. it just is wonderful, inspired me to write something similar too, well i will try my hand on such acrostic someday.. its cool.. like my pluff pluff spongey doll

    *hugs and kisses*

    take cares and have a nice time my dear friend.. just keep it up ... your humble little friend... ... ... .... - vic ( who else? )


  • MYownFreedom
    January 4, 2006
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    You have done well with what I asked for in this contest... you paint a lovely picture. The picture you posted, just adds to the write. Thank you so much for entering. Good luck with your entry Amy


  • jenelda silver member
    December 23, 2005
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    Thank you Abdul, I love doing Acrostics, especially from titles. And a Merry Christmas and appy New Year to you also.

    Regards Jenni xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

  • abdulrahman
    December 23, 2005
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    well jenni it seems to me u are fallingmore for acrostic and u are doing even more better than when iu started, i like the 3line which explain the colour
    in cluding the last line gracing....
    tremedious writing friend
    u great frienm
    am also wishing a happy x-mas n aprosperous new year4

  • InBetweenThoughts
    December 22, 2005
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    Hello Jennifer I see you have penned a perfect example and It looks and sounds wonderful. You did an excellent job at achieving this creative poem, thank you for sharing have a beautiful day, Ken....ps...I made a second version of my poem, thanks for your support, have a great day, Ken IBT

  • jenelda silver member
    December 21, 2005
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    Thank you Ed, good luck with yours, I know you will do it very well.

    Jen


  • Airborne Ed silver member
    December 21, 2005
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    the beauty of the setting sun is found within the beauty of your wonderful poem. You made this style of poetry flow with such ease. Your true tanints flow through out this beautiful poem with your unique style. Great writting... and good luck in the contest


  • Hinemoa silver member
    December 21, 2005
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    Hey Jenni, this is very cool, I have asked for a title if they're not all taken. I haven't tried this style, it looks very interesting. Great write. Good luck.
    Love sally.

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