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Bye now

This is good bye
So nice was the visit
You were all so kind
But I've worn out my welcome

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Faux pas?
No mention
Written December 21st, 2005

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  • Night Hope gold member
    December 21, 2005
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    Dirk??? What's goin' on, my Friend??? Don'tcha dare leave us, ya hear??? You haven't worn out any welcome...You have just as much right to be here as any of the rest of us...now stop thinkin' like this, 'k???