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Can Anyone Hear Me?

I feel like I'm standing
On the top of the world
Screaming
And no one even bothers
To look up
Where am I?
Who am I?
Even I'm not so sure anymore

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just venting through writing
Written December 20th, 2005

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  • d a f f o d i l
    April 2, 2006
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    Hey wow i am so sorry i have not been on in a while...This was really emotive and raw..i hope you have found the strength witih yourself...your a talented young writer!

    Fern