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The Ocelots

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Sweetest thing you ever did see
Hearts full of love and kindness
Always there to make you smile
Sighing as you gaze into their eyes

Simple, majestic creatures
One of God’s cutest creations
Fur so beautiful and gorgeous
Even the most sinister being loves it

They are just like you, my dear,
Beautiful, loving, and kind
Fast, decisive, and powerful
Something to gaze out for hours

Author notes

I honestly dislike this poem; however, someone on here might enjoy it. This is definately not one of my best pieces, but I have written worse (not posted on here). I did this picture probably a year ago or so and came across it a week ago or so. I decided to post it on here, but I figured I might as well write a poem about it. I was struggling with what to put in it which is why I dislike the overall poem. The picture is a mixture of several pictures combined together and fixed up in Photoshop 7. I didn't draw this or anything, but I did do a lot of work to do this picture.
Written December 20th, 2005

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  • luna-midnight gold member
    July 15, 2008
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    omg wowzers, awww, like wow....it makes me droll awe..lol.


  • perdisbeaute
    August 18, 2006
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    One word- Adorable


  • Sharcu silver member
    April 15, 2006
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    Thanks for your encouraging comment This isn't my best, but I liked the picture that went with it. Thanks again
    --Tim


  • mzblondemoments
    April 15, 2006
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    Great

    I really loved this poem and the pic ( how could anyone not fall in love with these beautiful creatures) that went with it. I agree that they seemed to be telling a story all their own. Very nice write, whether you were stuggling or not you did a great job and the outcome was wonderful.


  • ecclesiastes
    March 30, 2006
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    I really like this. I love Ocelots. I like how the eyes are so bright. It seems they want to tell a story. They are young and hold a future. You really are good at this stuff. *~*


  • DestinyLies
    December 23, 2005
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    SWEEEET SHARKMAN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! awesome!!!
    Candi


  • purplebubbles
    December 23, 2005
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    Vry nice pic i must say
    u do kno how to use computer well.
    lol anyway lovely poem and yus yus thats what i hv to say lol

    mars
    p.s mush didnt cal meee lol


  • misticmoonlite gold member
    December 22, 2005
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    Sharcu,I have been looking at your pictures the are very nice,this is awesome, I am partial to animals myself, you did well with the poem and great flow did the poem justice..keep up the great work..Linda


  • Master-Mush
    December 21, 2005
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    one of the cats (or w/e it is) looks like its crying... thats so kewl i liked this poem... *pout* lol
    a well... u no best of course

    mushy


  • FireyAura
    December 20, 2005
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    great

    Hey Tim,
    I really like this poem. I think that it really compliments the picture. I also loved how you brought our attention to peeple. It was awesome. Keep up the good work.
    ~Chelsea

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