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My Winter Solstice (Haiku)

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~by Gregg Rowe~

fallen virgin snow

gusts of flapper chilly winds

creates snow angels


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Written December 20th, 2005

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A contest entry

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  • MLee DICKENSson silver member
    March 1, 2006
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    I love the picture, Gregg. Suggest "create" for agreement with "gusts" deLighting in sharing, Daniel

  • pozo
    January 29, 2006
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    Very cold and wintery I liked it Keep writing, this was a very wintery poem, very poetic
    All the best
    Pozo


  • MagicLady silver member
    December 22, 2005
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    Greg,
    How nice to see your name in my contest. I was needing some nice short poetry to read. You came through for me, thank you so much.
    Your background goes great with your haiku. Love the little lamb! I love making snow angels. Seems like kids now a days don't like going out and playing in the snow like we used to. I guess there are too many indoor activities that they use. TV, Playstaions, PC's....... coach potato activities.

    Have a blessed holiday.

    Cheryl



  • astralshepherd gold member
    December 21, 2005
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    Brilliant

    This is brilliant Gregg and a truly wonderful Haiku...this is what happens when a gifted writer finds a pen, elegance; pure and simple elegance. Hope you have a wonderful Christmas and Blessed New Year. ~richard


  • CarolDesjarlais silver member
    December 20, 2005
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    Ohhhhhhhhh, gusts of flapper chily winds.......what an incredible choice of words.

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