With door close sit there with my little brother
Pretend we are not there
Beating and screaming outside the door
Hear mom screaming and crying
Daddy yelling and other women laughing and keep say louder, louder make her scream more
My little brother hold at me and whisper what happen to mommy?
Who is that women?
Is she a demon?
I'm not sure how to answer, I was only eight
I just said when you grow up you will found out what happen to mommy
Finally daddy and this women get tried they went to their room
Then mom come to our room
Bloods from her mouth, eyes and all over her face
Her shirt and pant are cut into piece there blood every where with knife cut
I finally can't take it anymore
I ran over to my mommy hold her tight
She the greatest mommy in the world,
She is the one I love dearest
To me, my family are just me, my little brother and mommy
But today I have to tell mommy leave this home
Leave us, but one day I promise we will escape this maddest
Then I silently ran into master bedroom and see daddy and this woman making love
I crawl under the bed and get daddy wallet and this woman purse
I crawl again silently back out then I ran into my room
Take all the money form the wallet and the credit cards too.
Give it to mommy.
Then tell my little brother give mommy all the money he have, then I ran into closet and get my money out
Give all to mommy and said mommy please take this and run. You are only hope even through we be apart for a while. But I know you will come to save us. Mommy please run
Then mommy run with tears in her eyes. Knowing she won't see her children for a very long time.
But she know when she come back for her children. It the time she could control her own life and her children will be really for her.
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Funny isn't it a lots of people only remember the bad time over the good time. Well so am I. I only remember what hurts me the most. That will be this woman and my screw up dad. I don't hate them enough to let them dead but i wish i was never born.
Written December 20th, 2005
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One needs just not an experience to write such a hurtful and painful poem, but also guts.Dear Snow, I was brought in a happy family, though I missed my Daddy alot, He went to heaven when I
was an year old kid. But I have three brothers who take lot of care about me. But yet I can feel your pain, as your friend and
as a human being. But I can try my level best to heal your pain ful wounds. So let me know when you need a close friend. And I
am there for you always.
OKAY now I'm trying to Bake a Cake for you.....
Can you feel the franges? Hmm It looks yummy....
Wait not to soon.....
Done!
Snow please open your mouth....
How was it?
Your smile tells me that it was yummy.
Thank you, take care.Pretty. -
I hope it is not true too. but it is true
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bravo!
Wow this is potent stuff! Enough to make me cry. (It is poem true? I hope not.) A very moving piece. Bravo! -
thank you asiangirl and sweetheart, It really hard for me to forget about the past what my father did to this family. I'm just glad that we get out of this maddest and we still suriving. sometime looking back i just hate myself because i'm so helpless and so useless. Even when I grow up i still can't hear people say things like that it make me so angry and sad. How can you hit or abuse them at anyway their are/once was love of your life. I just don't get it. But i glad to say my mother is fully recover from it, b/c we no longer live with them, my mom get us out five years ago.
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Great job on this one. Feel with sadness that make my heart cry. My friend Rebeca read these this poem with me, cry all the way and she want me to wish you well and hope in the future things like that don't happen much. Again great job and Me and my friend love your work
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Wow dreamer...that's so sad...I'm almost crying when I read that.*hugs*.I know what you mean.My dad's beat up my mom before.It was horrible and I had to stand there.helplessly,and watch it all.I can never erase that from my mind and neither will you with that experience.I hope everything works out for you and great job
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