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The Choir

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The small choir of angels
sing softly and true
They are singing their
carols for me....
and for you;
They sing of a newborn
asleep in the hay
of Mary his mother
and Joseph ..who prays;
Wise kings who adorn him
with gifts rich and rare
and cattle surround him..
as close as they dare;
The notes drift around us
so sharp and so clear
telling stories to treasure
and always hold dear.




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Written December 20th, 2005

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  • cutiepie gold member
    December 21, 2005
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    Thank you for your kind comments, as always they are appreciated. I do thank you for your note regarding the "Kings"..I also remember somewhere that "Christmas" was originally september..october time I love this special time as it allows us all to once again return to our childhood and re-live some special memories

  • cutiepie gold member
    December 21, 2005
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    Thank you Lori for your kind comment Very "Merry Christmas" to you and yours

  • cutiepie gold member
    December 21, 2005
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    Thank you


  • cutiepie gold member
    December 21, 2005
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    There is something rather special about small children singing..perhaps it is the pure voices that touch us rather than the words Many thanks for your comments

  • cutiepie gold member
    December 21, 2005
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    Many thanks Delighted that you enjoyed it


  • Faded silver member
    December 21, 2005
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    I love the form of this... it slides so smoothly from one line to the next... perfect for your subject matter. I also like that you chose a chior rather than your average christmas-poem-carollers.
    ~Faded


  • Breaking The Girl
    December 21, 2005
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    Awww... this was so beautiful. You described everything so well, perfectly, actually. Just yesterday I went to my little sister's choir concert, and they looked so cute up there! lol

  • poeticwords
    December 21, 2005
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    You captured "The Choir" very well.. This write is simple. There is no complexity needed in the explanation of something so simply beautiful. Wonderful job!

    -KIm


  • December 21, 2005
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    I really like this i couldn't see the picture. But anyway i loved this poem. It is so true i love to listen to the choir sing Christmas carols especailly the ones about the baby Jesus. Thanks for this wonderful seasonal write. Merry early CHRISTMAS!!!!!
    ~~lori~~


  • Windworder gold member
    December 21, 2005
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    A soft poem of adoration. Somehow I envisioned a children's choir at church. Maybe the picture. This does spark the imagination. A theological note of interest, maybe. The wise men were not at the manger, the bible says they came later. Merry CHRISTmas and thanks for the seasonal write.

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