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Love me

As the world starts to end
New loves are made
Hearts are broken
And babies are born

The end of the world
Doesn't mean the end of life
It means a new beginning
For me and you

For the years that have past
I regret not telling you the truth
I need to tell you something
And i need to say it before time runs out

I love you....
This isn't a sappy poem
Its a way for me to tell you
Tell you i need you

Though the world is ending
This is a new beginning
For you and for me
I don't want to die without you knowing

I fall deeper into this abyss
Crying and dying for gentle touch
Screaming out that i love you
Holding you close to me

Knowing that i miss your smile
I miss playing games with you
Missing the way you said i love you
Without even speaking a single word

Abandoned by my family you offered to take me in
Love me and care for me
Even though you could not show it
Without you i will lose my soul

Lying awake at night i wonder
Is it insomnia or is it the thought of you
The thought of you and me together
Free from our families and our burdens

My heart is shattered into a million pieces
My dreams are broken shards of wishful thinking
My mind corrupted by today's media
My body punished for the bad things i have done

Love and lust are not illusions
They are real and are one
Love is never without lust
This is my downfall

Using a tourniquet to stop the blood
The blood i shed for you
The tears i cried for you
I never hold them back

I love you
Please love me too

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Written December 20th, 2005

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  • Scott0
    January 20, 2006
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    This almost seems as if it was intended for someone, it's really deep, I love coming across a poem that doesn't rhyme and yet is smooth to read...Great write!
    -Scott0-


  • Raazi
    January 9, 2006
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    The flow was brilliant, and the poem had a great choice of words. The best part was that it was a very spontaneous poem.....an honest poem. Well done.


    Please give this poem a look.
    allpoetry.com/poem/1746120


  • Janice M Pickett
    December 30, 2005
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    WELL DONE

    Really well written poem. I liked the way it flowed and how your story flowed. You have a talent and thats showing through in your writing.
    Well done
    Hugs
    Jan


  • ravenofdarkness
    December 26, 2005
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    good poem used the words well well done


  • felicitisdancer
    December 25, 2005
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    excellent

    great use of the word bank good job

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