I needed it
Oh I needed it bad
I’d been waiting and watching
Watching and waiting
The time was finally approaching
I was ready to explode like
Some star in the distance
But who am I kidding,
Stars are big balls of gas
So maybe all I had was gas
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Written December 20th, 2005
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cracking up.. I don't care who you are if you can't laugh at fart jokes you need help.. You nut.. Thanks for the laugh, Cat
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thanks. I always get a tongue in cheek laugh outof myself when I'm completely out to left field
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LOL!
hahahaha!lol! you're so funny! Now that was Fucking hilarious!
The metaphors you elude to make this poem fresh and raw.
It really comes alive an you feel like it's from the heart.
Like real and not just something made up. Very entertaining!
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omg this was funny. and after reading the screaming cumfire of an orgasm write, i was wondering where this was going!
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WOW THIS IS GREAT. FUNNY JUST WHAT I NEEDE TODAY. GREAT JOB
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LOL, i was tricked , it was gas, lol, i feel punk'd. lol, you did it again, another shining example of writing at it's best, i am nevver less then impressed and inspired by your works. keep it flowing and check ya later.
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L-O-L.
Nice one. Love the humor, talk about humor.. lol.. I'm not sure if anyone totally relates to or gets this, but I sure do!!!
Merry Christmas, and many more happy poems,
Angie.
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