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My life’s all topsy-turvy
Nothing ever seems the same
Constantly flickering
Like a candles waning flame

My tongue bleeds
With things left unsaid
My body is full
Of unrelenting dread

What’s coming next?
Never will I know
How to be ready
For the upcoming blow

Author notes

I have no idea.
Written December 20th, 2005

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  • Anti Everything
    February 19, 2006
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    looooovvvvvveeeee ittttttt!


  • iceofthestars
    December 20, 2005
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    I'm not sure quite why I like this, but I do. I really like the lines, "My tongue bleeds / With things left unsaid." Never heard the bleeding tongue thing before, that's pretty cool. ^.^