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This time it's goodbye

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You said I had no feelings for you anymore
so you stay away from me.
that’s no excuse to totally ignore me, is it?
I can’t dictate what the heart doesn’t feel
anymore.
My life has changed, gone in another direction
you had your chance, but you blew it!
But then, ignoring me is not new to you, is it?
that’s the reasons my feelings for you died!
the month’s of silence became too much!

So, one year ago this month I said goodbye,
that is until recently, when you wanted me back!
Did you expect me to pick up where we left off?
you pursued me, said you loved only me,
you never listened when I told you
“It’s too late”
You’d get angry, and off you’d go again!
But you always came back, no matter what I said,
but this time you did listen, said you were hurt.
Did you ever think of the times you hurt me? NO!
So, I guess this time it’s really goodbye,
friendship alone is not enough for you.
Please, this time, don’t come back.

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This is how I'm feeling at the moment
after another confrontation.
But it's over for good,
now I can get on with my life.
I read-"Waiting to die" whispersoftly
"Final goodbye  SweetLiteChocolate"
I read yours.
"Faint Whisper"
"Echoes in the head"

Written December 19th, 2005

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  • jenelda silver member
    January 6, 2006
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    Hey Vic, good to see you drop by, yeah, same old same old....but gone this time for GOOD Lovesya my little chickadee. I only just found your comment, with all the IM'S from the group I'm in I miss everything but I'll be leaving it in the next day or two.........too much yakking. Take care my handsome young man
    Jenni


  • eternalpoet
    January 4, 2006
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    3 Stars ***

    oo. i guess i know whats and whom this poem is about.. .. i have nothing to say except i am proud of your decision

    *hugs and kisses*... very emoitional poem, and it must have taken alot from you to write this.. good poem.. important poem

    take cares and have a nice time my dear friend.. just keep it up... your humble little friend... ... .... .... - vic ( who else? )


  • jenelda silver member
    December 31, 2005
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    Thank you sweetheart for your comment, I appreciate it.

    Jennifer.

  • cryingblood67
    December 30, 2005
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    i really liked that but im sorry that happened to you keep writing!!

  • OurxBeginning
    December 20, 2005
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    This is really good, filled with emotion. Sorry to hear this happended, but glad you're moving on; for your own good. Thanks for entering, and good job.


  • Eeyores Buddy
    December 20, 2005
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    I'm glad it's over for you.. as hard as it can be having another confrontation, it sometimes happens. I'm sure if he does come back you'll show him where the door is You may bump into him on the high street or wherever it may be.. just walk on by Best of luck to you and in the contest


  • Prince Charming
    December 20, 2005
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    A final goodbye. I think thats good However its very heavy for the heart your protect yourself for more damage. After the first time the wounds stay and your trust is broken. And however you want to stay together its better to break up when the solid love is broken. Its like a statue thats repaired with glue It will never get its old beauty back. It could look alright but there will be always little pieces missing. An excellent write. I hope you find happiness back the world wont stop turning and the sun will again shine for you I am sure Hugs Herman

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