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Pay you back ten times more

Daddy why you thought she is the perfect one?
Can't you see she's nothing more than trouble?
She make mommy leave home and never come back
She make me do all the things I don't want to do
She make me look bad in front of your face
Daddy why you listen to everything she say?
Was is because she more beautiful than mom, was it?

You and mom have been marry for ten years
Ten years not even worth one month with her
You keep said when I grow up I understand
Don't you know I want to understand now
I want to know why you don't love mom anymore
Before you met her
You and mommy are greatest couple in the world
Everyone admire you and mommy

After you met her
Whole world break apart, you and mom start getting argument
You start to beat up mom every night
Then she move in
Mommy is really angry start to have argues with her
She did not say anything, She don't have to
Because you start to slap mommy face then punch her stomach
yet, she say nothing because she is laughing so hard
I'm only eight years old and my little brother is only six years old
We see the whole thing,
That time we know it time to give up childhood
It time to take revenge after after ten years of beating from you and her
We still surviving because we want you and her die before us
We want to see you two get burn at hell
We want to see you two getting old and beg for the money
We want you and her begging at mommy
Begging her for the forgiveness
I promise with my blood and my life one day we will make thing whole things happen.
Not just writing it int he poem
Everything you two did to mom and my little brother
I will pay you back ten times more
I promise that one day will come
It might not be today or tomorrow
But as years goes by your two will get old and my dreams will come true
IT not a swear, it's a promise
Promise that will bring you two to hell and I will laugh about it
So enjoy having fun with you life while you can and have the energy for it
One day you two will get old and we grow stronger
But the hatred of you two will stay forever
So don't beg for forgiveness
That only make me and my little brother hate you two even more
Just writing this poem make me want to stab you and her for thousands of time
But you two blood only sicken me and my little brother
Besides where all the fun
I won't kill you nor hurt you in physical way because that can all heal
But emotional scar is there forever
so have fun with you life daddy and my new mommy

Author notes

So people might not get the idea of what this poem about or what it talking about. But to me it make alots of sense.
Written December 19th, 2005

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  • DreameeDarlin2U
    December 20, 2005
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    This is amazing dreamer. You filled it full of emotion. So sad. Keep your chin up. It will be okay.


  • dreamer wind
    December 19, 2005
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    How i wish i was writing this poem for someone else, but life is just life you have to deal with it. Thank you for reading this poem and yes it really happen in my life. It been ten years now. Yet, I still remember it like yesterday. Funny isn't it people tend to remember bad thing over the good things. I guess that what hurt you the most


  • MorningWinds
    December 19, 2005
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    Wow such emotions! It's so sad,dreamer .I hope this really didn't happen to you.I know life is rough.I'm here wanting to kill myself over love.Life can be so horrible can't it?Yes,but we can heal it.Nothing in my life is to laugh about.That's why you see me making other people happy and bring myself down.Why?Because I don't care.But this kind of care is selfless.The kind of "don't care" in this poem is just pure hate.You did an amazing job.
    Edited on Dec 19, 10:54 p.m. because ''.


  • December 19, 2005
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    Uh....... I just glad i'm not in this situation at all period. I love this hatred poem, It have a lots of emtion toward your dad. Which i amusing you hate most. Anyway great poem and powerful words