i am not alone
i am not alone
i am not alone
i am not alone
i am not alone
i am not alone
i am not alone
i am not alone
i am not alone
i am not alone
i am not alone
i am not alone
i am not alone
the more i say the more i know
the more i know how much i don't
i am not alone
so i am told
but why can i feel this
this long unending road
goes on for miles
filled with fake
happy smiles
nothing left no life to take
you must have to take
you must have bad
to have a goodness sake
what reason is there light
if we have not dark
what is a roaring fire
but something bugger's spark
what is going on inside my head
is this the feeling once more i dread
a feeling worse than that of dead
I call it bloodless
I am alive
but it doesn't matter
i don't exist but in your mind
i can feel nothing
though i know everything is there
i can see no one but i can feel them stare
not at me but threw me
why cant unbind eyes see
i stand in this my misery
to wait for one who can
one to stand
right next me
and lift this curse
this pain is what i breathe
Author notes
hi.... wow i havent written in a bit... if you comment i ask you pick out something you like or didnt like, not to make my readers work.... acutally yeah it is. cause i dont want mindless stalker points if ya know what i mean.
Written December 19th, 2005
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wow thankyou!!! i thinks ill write another!!!
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wow that was great! i really liked it nice job! keep it up!
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"i can see no one but i can feel them stare
not at me but threw me
why cant unbind eyes see
i stand in this my misery"
I really like that part
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^_^
I really like the poem, it is wonderful!i!i!i!i!i!i! Yay! But really, It is very nice, and as you requested...
My favorite part is :
"I call it bloodless
I am alive
but it doesn't matter
i don't exist but in your mind
i can feel nothing"
It is awsome how you used your user name in the poem!!!
& to me none of it feels like you are a stalker (even though I know that you are) (just kidding about that) Any ways, the poem is nice, and well written. Great Write!
Kristy
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WOW! This is great! You are a very talented
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